First of all, your webpage was blocked by Windows Parental Controls, I thought that was hilarious. I also think you need to take more angle shots of your mask-in-a-log. That is the piece I will be critiquing. You use the log as a balancing form to the mask, which also eomploys motion as the lines of the log move outward and encompass the face. There is definitely emphasis on the mask, but also variety with the different textured of both the log and the face. TO me, it looks like the spirit of a tree, a dead tree and the spirit within calling out with its last energy and manifesting. Or a wizard trapped in the tree and trying to escape. It feels like loneliness and humanity in nature attempting to leave. The motion in the lines of the log and the cracks int he mask are definitely working, I wish it was more than just the log and the face, though, like you adding more onto it with your own things and artistic-ness...stuff.
First of all, your webpage was blocked by Windows Parental Controls, I thought that was hilarious.
ReplyDeleteI also think you need to take more angle shots of your mask-in-a-log. That is the piece I will be critiquing.
You use the log as a balancing form to the mask, which also eomploys motion as the lines of the log move outward and encompass the face. There is definitely emphasis on the mask, but also variety with the different textured of both the log and the face.
TO me, it looks like the spirit of a tree, a dead tree and the spirit within calling out with its last energy and manifesting. Or a wizard trapped in the tree and trying to escape. It feels like loneliness and humanity in nature attempting to leave.
The motion in the lines of the log and the cracks int he mask are definitely working, I wish it was more than just the log and the face, though, like you adding more onto it with your own things and artistic-ness...stuff.